pennywise said:Damn L2R, your videos have this really abstract, cerebral quality. They always make me think "wtf?!" but in a really good way, if you know what I mean. :D
This one makes me curious as to what was said, as well as how it relates to the image. Would it ruin it to play it again in the video, only forward this time?![]()
I also liked the amorphous red/pink shapes in the background. It gave the clip a nice organic quality, while at the same time evoking a sense of danger, or violence, or maybe passion, but with that fluid, calming feeling too. It was a cool combination of sensations, like an unexpected combination that paradoxically blends well.
keep em comin, i think you could work this one into a longer video at some point too.![]()
first attempt? i really enjoyed it.Damien8787 said:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0b5aT93cedQ
Ok first of all sorry for the small size. I am still learning. =)
I am not terribly happy with this but I put some time into it so here it is.
I am really bothered by some pacing issues, especially in the beginning.
I learned a lot though and hopefully I will put out something better soon.
Critique away. (i.e. tear it up!)
ninjadanslarbretabar said:btw l2r what music program do you use ?
cuz you seem to be knowledgeable on that since your doing remix and song and stuff
but thought it was pretty strange that you are new to "bakwarding"
^ that and time-stretch have being some of my first fun stuff to experiment with when i fist started with fruity loops (music software)![]()
and sorry for not commenting on video
i dont force things
if i feel inspire ill write stuff (just like in the pic thread i dont post comment on every pic...)
but i sure do appreciate the video![]()
so cheers to everyone participating![]()
edit : oh and peace sign are not cheezy !! dammit !! (hehe, coming from the guy who as a heart as a avatar....)
last time i saw them, i was full to the gills with mdma and they finished with it. i had a tear in my eye.L2R said:the brothers played that superb track IN FULL during their solo show the other week
you could always just paste the link into another player (media player or what have you).L2R said:yeah the text goes too fast. it isn't helped by the quicktime player from your link restricts the size of the screen.
no they couldn'tL2R said:your words could have been a little more concise.
L2R said:Nice cuts ali! excellent music selection (the brothers played that superb track IN FULL during their solo show the other week).
alasdairm said:thanks for the feedback.
alasdair
AmorRoark said:Stop with the off-topic discussion.![]()
alasdairm said:ok, i actually made this a little while ago but i'm still interested in feedback:
the story
i feel the pacing is a little off - i'm a very fast reader and i fear the story scrolls a little too fast. plus, i wanted it sync'ed to the first half of the track - before the breakdown - so i may have shoehorned it in a little.
i guess, if anything, it's a contrast of a story told with words and a story told with pictures.
my mind is now racing with ideas for new, more moving, short clips - i just have to make one
alasdair