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ok this is the first time i have ever tried writing anything like this in my 20 years on this earth. i dont know if anyone else will like it but i just needed to get it out. thanks :Þ
It’s been a month today,
It feels like a lifetime.
The love is not lost,
Yet put away for another day.
The smell of your hair,
The feeling of your body against mine.
I told you I didn’t want to leave that night,
I wish I never had.
The time we spent together
Feels like so long ago.
To break up for that reason,
It kills me to know there was nothing wrong.
I can’t see you.
Knowing the feelings that will jump right back into my heart.
It took me long enough to get you out of my every thought the first time,
I don’t want to go through it again.
Yet the love is still there,
For no one else but you.
When you want to reclaim it,
You know where I am.
 
that was really beautiful...because you were so honest with what you are feeling. i wish my x would say things like that...but he's too shallow and afraid of his true feelings, oh well. keep on expressing yourself...u r good at it
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~When darkness thinks that it's outdone me,
I must remember that the greatest love's
inside of me~
 
omg...this is exactly what i felt (still kinda do i guess) for one of my exes. it is so true, especially the pain of seeing them again. thanx for sharing this w/us.
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*~much love and fuzzy hugs~*~
*~bLueSunShiNe~*~
 
i just want to say thanks for all of your great responses!! it really means a lot to me to hear all of your great thoughts.
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whoa...seems like you wrote everything that was in my head.....wow....wow...thanks for sharing. I really really liked it.
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