Tonight

[tubgirl.jpg]

In my careful desperation,
this old leash I gave a name
Can you smell the rain
that will drown us tonight?
In your diamond studded choker,
the chain rattle soothingly
Honey, won't you beg,
won't you beg like you believe?


And tonight we paint rapture,
dip your feathers in gold
And tonight nothing matters,
show me how you destroy


In the grace I surrender,
sun-kissed lips full of cracks
Glossy pink smeared with red,
bleed your mercy on me
In the third act comes closure,
and we keep pushing it off
There's no happy endings
for villains like us


And tonight we paint rapture,
for everything that we stole
And tonight nothing matters,
show me how you destroy

 

[Hannah Capps]

Reminds me of the song “it’s all over” by Revis good content

 

[RareForm]

Key details here. You do have a gift, my friend.

In the third act comes closure,
and we keep pushing it off
There's no happy endings
for villains like us

 

[tubgirl.jpg]

Reminds me of the song “it’s all over” by Revis good content

Haven't heard it, but I will listen to it.

Key details here. You do have a gift, my friend.

Thank you man!

 

[PtahTek]

And tonight nothing matters,
show me how you destroy

Somehow beautiful and dreadful at once.
I love your writings, bro.
They are all hearfelt and somehow connections abound.

 

[tubgirl.jpg]

Somehow beautiful and dreadful at once.
I love your writings, bro.
They are all hearfelt and somehow connections abound.

I'm so happy you do man, it means a lot to hear

 

[PtahTek]

Man I miss you in some way. Not sure whats going on in life for you atm but I always have you in the back of my head somehow.
Rarity is obvious to me....

 

[Shady's Fox]

Man I miss you in some way. Not sure whats going on in life for you atm but I always have you in the back of my head somehow.
Rarity is obvious to me....

the writing sounds too merged, feels like an extension of at least 5 other of their writings.

 

[PtahTek]

the writing sounds too merged, feels like an extension of at least 5 other of their writings.

maybe from your point of view (which is not to invalidate).
my views are that it is all connected in some way but more exspansive.