Looks a bit too brand new, crisp, and clean? It might look alright by the time you reach Neil Young's age
The last cap I bought was something like this, but in green. I quite like it, I cba with all the faff of uploading pics via a hosting site, so I've just direct linked it
Plus the Americans or Canadian's seem to get a much better range of those tartan / check shirt / jackets (not sure what the correct name for them is) such as the one sported by Mr Young there. Shouldn't he have changed his name to Neil Old by now though?
I know what you mean about taking style tips from pensioners. There's this aged Aspergers guy on youtube and I'll take all his life experience and his sage thoughts about it, and dealing with some of the difficult issues that he shares on his channel, (probably saves me about 40 years in figuring out all the stuff he's already figured out) but I do draw the line at taking style advice from him! As a 70 something Aspergers ex-pastor you may imagine his sense of style. It's really not quite what I'd aspire to tbh.
He does drop the odd embarrassing clanger, but overall he's one of my preferred 'advocates.'