^ post some

i'd be very interested to hear your works in progress.
okay tranced, i dunno man after your post about average n' gettin stuck, decided to go back to it.
now with vocals, and a 4/4 oomph tss oomph tss. kinda clubby. i really like it, and think i learned something new, all because of you ;p
Haha Joe, I love your posts in here. Just posting your tunes with comments like "dang, this is dope af! lol". I can just imagine you sitting making tunes with a smile one your face, in a state of baked amazement.
Glad to hear my post made you go back and reassess. It's funny because now that you've asked to hear my tune, it's inspired me to sit down and sort out what I have so far. I wasn't planning on posting it online until it was finished, but I might PM it to you if I get the bits I have near enough sorted.
With regards to your tune above, I really really like the sounds you've made/used, especially that kind of dubbed out housey vibe with the drawn out chords. IMO, and it's just personal taste, but I don't really think the vocal fit the darker vibe of the track, but I'm not really keen on r'n'b esque vocals, so it's obviously just personal preference. I always think that vocals like that have a bit of a sort of cheesy message/vibe, which like I say I don't think fits with the tune.
I'd love to hear some of the more musical vocals that fit the backing track sounding a bit more unintelligible, minimal and stretched out. Kind of like at 2.57 - 2.59 where it says "head helf high, fingers to the sky", and then some you have some kind of short pads/chords going on in the background. I feel like if the vocal was used more as a kind of stretched out unintelligible paddy chordy sound, working with the paddy chordy sound I mentioned, it would really work (the sounds have a similar vibe, but you don't notice so much when it's overtly vocal). And to remove some of the other vocal sounds and just strip it back to a nice darkish sort of house track.
I'd also love to hear the hard bass that comes in at 1.08 breach into sudden techno territory, on a full length emd version of the track.
But again, that's just my personal preference. Not trying to control your tune or out. I just prefer darker deeper vibez, which I hear below the acapellas
If I do PM you my tune tonight, then we have fully influenced each other.
