mdnghtuforia1202
Greenlighter
SO, I gotta say I'm a bit overexcited here. This will be the first post by me in this forum! I have been writing for years; it helps me out with any internal issues I'm having at the time. But anyway, I wrote this piece in '04 so yeah, it's a bit outdated but I like it and I hope that you will too! 
Poor Fellow
Poor fellow
You hurt.
What's wrong?
You know,
Those thoughts don't belong.
Trying to cower,
Pulling in every breath.
The air has you pinned
Under its great strength.
A pit of quicksand
And rubber knees-
I don't care,
Do what you please.
The last, lonely
Drip in the cup.
If you'll allow me,
I can be the wings
To pick you back up.
But oh that scowl
Used with perfection-
My anger rides
To its fullest extension.
The weight shifts
On unknown regards.
You stand there laughing;
I cry without guard,
Or heart, or soul,
Or simple wish,
Cracked as a fallen dish.
And so he now asks
'Dear baby, what's wrong?'
I laugh and I sigh
With a tear in my eye-
I've been the poor fellow
All along.
9/21/04
Angel
Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed it. Feel free to give me feedback!
Poor Fellow
Poor fellow
You hurt.
What's wrong?
You know,
Those thoughts don't belong.
Trying to cower,
Pulling in every breath.
The air has you pinned
Under its great strength.
A pit of quicksand
And rubber knees-
I don't care,
Do what you please.
The last, lonely
Drip in the cup.
If you'll allow me,
I can be the wings
To pick you back up.
But oh that scowl
Used with perfection-
My anger rides
To its fullest extension.
The weight shifts
On unknown regards.
You stand there laughing;
I cry without guard,
Or heart, or soul,
Or simple wish,
Cracked as a fallen dish.
And so he now asks
'Dear baby, what's wrong?'
I laugh and I sigh
With a tear in my eye-
I've been the poor fellow
All along.
9/21/04
Angel
Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed it. Feel free to give me feedback!
I love it.