mean girl: i'm not sure. i actually don't mind it, all said, but there are a few things that could be done better - certainly the way i quote things is a little awkward.
if i had to keep the same word length, it might have been worth cutting a few topics and focusing more - the media issue certainly didn't get as much of a go as i would have liked. if i'd been able to expand the word length, i would have used it to flesh things out, instead of *having* to rely on some of the (albeit real) stereotypes which i used.
potato: yeah, probably just that mainly - the g issue is a big one. house music is still as big as ever in melbourne, and the people are just the same (perhaps a little more pretentious though?).