Don't apologize Robot, you should be saying 'you're welcome'!
Thanks for the help guys, I wanted some critique and advice/tips.
Here's my second edition CV:
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Dear reader(s)
I am excited to apply for ((if you can reasearch the company to come up with specific job titles it might help in demonstrating you went the extra mile to learn about the company, helping you stand out from those with more rote/boilerplate cover letters)) working in the audio sector of your company. Enclosed is a copy of my resume highlighting my skills and accomplishments in the field.
My name is censored and I have a strong passion for sound engineering. Not only would I love to be in the same environment as the sound engineers who work at your company, I look forward to the opportunity to share my passion for X while applying myself- not crazy about that phrasing- and continuing learn as much as possible about the field. I have recently applied, and expect to be accepted, to study a certificate III in Technical Production at TAFE (Salisbury Campus).
Computers and technology have been life-long passions of mine, I'm a very quick learner, and I am also quite intuitive when it comes to operating programs. I enjoy listening to a wide range of music, am a team player, flexible, and devoted to my goal of excelling in this field. I am confident that when you check with my references you will learn that not only am I very personable and and easy to kwork with, I also go the extra mile to accomplish everything I set my mind to. I also work well individually, have the ability to multi-task, and have solid communicating skills. My love for x- sound engenerring, whatever-, combined with my eagerness to learn and excell in this field make me the ideal candidate to be a stong asset to your company.
I guarentee that you will by making the right choice to schedule an interview with me, and look forward to hearing from you in the near future. Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. I can be contacted via email at censored or by phone at censored
Yours sincerely,
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