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Lsd ~ Experienced ~ Sailing On The Astral Ocean

Beautiful, just beautiful zophen, those PMs at the end.. you really should work towards becoming a psychedelic Burroughs. exquisite language, true psychedelic art!
 
^ you pisstaking or serious I am never 100% certain and doubt at times you know either LOL!!

I'm serious Z!!! Pole-dancing patriotism and thorazine suppositories are one thing, flowing, descriptive language that tickles the brain and warms the heart is another matter altogether!
 
fastandbulbous said:
If one of us wins the lottery, we will pay to have you transported across the pond (if it's a jackpot win it wont have to be in a large animal transporter type affair =D), then feed you irresponsible amounts of LSD (along with us) before running wild & free in the N of England

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Mmmmm... LSD.... agghhhh...

Beenhead said:
Zophen your writing is superb, actually, and If you worked at it I think you could be a very good writer. You are especially good with the Imagery.

I totally agree. You get a bad rap around here, mostly because it takes a bit of thought and concentration to be able to understand what you're saying. I think a psychedelic mindset helps a lot as well ;)

Your punctuation/grammar is the only thing you need to work on, but at the same time the way you use it helps to get your tone and inflection across.
 
^ Thank you for all the above comments very kind of yous! I haven't ever been able to just let the typewriter fire (editor off )before, it's really nice to actually feel that freedom, especially as I didn't give a shit about it. Twas a true outpouring of how I felt . Some people seem to find that a bit much , fucking SOCIETIAL values ha!


Anyway thank you all, I appreciate the fact you say such kind stuff, and I appreciate you genuinely mean it !:)
 
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