Poetry Hamiform

[RareForm]

She glistens while she falls
Delicate, like a touch of rain
When it kisses the skin
The joy of admittance thus
Has taken him by surprise:

With a stirring need of love, he burns
He bends, he laughs, he says he knows
But forgets upon his return
To lament the changing

"Please go"

Words like these shut a door
And there isn't a window to explore
All of her that was before
The gentle peace of that rain
Will not be felt again

 

[tubgirl.jpg]

I began marking up what I liked about this whole piece, but ended up marking everything.

With a stirring need of love, he burns
He bends, he laughs, he says he knows
But forgets upon his return
To lament the changing

"Please go"

Words like these shut a door

But this was just amazing, the cherry on the cake.

I love reading your work. It's a joy everytime!

 

[RareForm]

Thank you so much for reading, @tubgirl.jpg, and your wonderful comments.

 

[cduggles]

Yes, all the lines are my favorite. Superb piece.

 

[Juniper Bruhmomentius]

Really fucking good poem

 

[RareForm]

Yes, all the lines are my favorite. Superb piece.

Really fucking good poem

Thank you both so much! I'm honored that you enjoyed it.