you're so sick mommy i love you

[rollinginecstasy]

i found a gate to hell and took a little tour last night
i never thought a place so sick could make me feel so right
i saw my daddy's demon stare at me with bleeding eyes
that one lady that mommy hates laughed funny tortured cries
i smoked meth with the devil and she made my knees feel weak
we had some sex, my tooth fell out, i kissed her on the cheek
i smiled as a girl i used to know came crawling by
i spit up blood into her mouth as she began to cry
i can't believe my mommy's closet door leads straight to hell
when i came out she slapped me so i promised not to tell

 

[Khadijah]

sounded like someone was tryin to sound gothic at first but then i read it arnd it wars better than the 'im tortured' title. tight work. it is good i think the 1st 4 lines done make too much sense, but towards the end it does make sense and the phrasing of it sounds mad good the end 2 lines are the best.