You're emo so prove it

[Mary Poppins]

Swallow that razorblade
Cheaply
It’s not worth the money you put
Where your mouth is

You thought better
He thought worse
It’s a pity, dear, a real shame
He never knew
Where you wanted to go or

What you needed
To hear
To make you stay.
Not go away
Another day

It’s ok
To find a way to stop
This rhythm
This rhyme...
He never wanted you anyway?

 

[doofqueen]

wow! That was heaps cool. It flows and bounces so well and expresses so much!

 

[knight_marshall]

i can feel the razor blade just existing my throat right now...

thankyou

 

[(Wordy)]

You're emo so prove it

Swallow that razorblade
Cheaply

Cuts like a razorblade...

 

[Raz]

Wow, those first 4 lines are so vicious....I love it!

 

[Innocuous]

I realy like the way you make this bounce, nice.

 

[up all night]

^ Yeah, agreed. I like the way it flows down that inevitable path some of us know so well.

 

[freedomclub]

I'm so emo that hurt my feelings, bad.