You

[oceandreams]

Only wanted you
drowning in eyes liquid blue
Melting into you the way lovers do
I only wanted you
to show you beauty
to be with you
Only wanted you
Never wanted to own you
only to share this world with you
I only wanted you
only wanted to make you smile
Instead you made me cry
I only wanted you

 

[RareForm]

i'm somewhat satisfied with the length, i think it fits, but i would also like to see you take it further. either way, i love the feeling i get from this. thanks.

 

[oceandreams]

i might not really sure but thank you

 

[oceandreams]

RF here is the updated version you were looking for Not sure if I did it justice but let me know what you think.