You

[mariacallas]

You ..............very simple.

In solitude im not alone
I think of all the joys weve known
Those crazy days
The fun we shared
The tears you dried
The way you cared
You taught me love, your spirit free
Will always be a part of me

But during times when
Your love is running low
And i just cannot fathom
Why things become so

I tread alone down the street
Towards a place I dread to go
Looking for all the answers
I feel but just dont know

Along the way i have come to see
You, my love, both miracle mystery
Standing in silence and reverie
Our past comes flowing back to me

 

[i_enjoy_ecstasy]

WHOA this is excellent crystalcallas! reminds me of the past, post some more!

 

[RareForm]

beautiful work. flowed quite nicely. thanks for sharing.

 

[Squiggle]

Yeah, at the end I felt sad, but I was smiling. It really did flow nicely and turned out to be a wonderful peice of work.

 

[Negative]

 

[alostlittlebird]

Very cool

strong rhyme and a strong point, works well