"You"

[human paraquat]

From you
I crawled away,
a clubfooted mollusk,
wearing your absence,

some speckled shell

to be dusted and palmed

for years

to come.

 

[RareForm]

From you
I crawled away,
a clubfooted mollusk,
wearing your absence,

some speckled shell

to be dusted and palmed

for years

to come.

wow....this is awesome...

 

[onetwothreefour]

fantastic work.

i like the paragraphing too, because it emphasises the right things.

 

[cherub]

a lovely piece i love the wording,
and it just flows sooo nicely

definately excellent work!