~You wanna know something...?~

[mariacallas]

Super simple rhyme.......

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You wanna know something?
Id gladly give up breathing
just so you wouldnt have to breathe your last
Would you remember me,this I often wonder
Even after i am but a ghost in your past?

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You wanna know what else?
Id think nothing of crying oceans
And drifting aimlessly in a sea of pain
Id even forget how to stay afloat
Just so i could drown deep in your rain

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You wanna know what more?
Ive cried way too much blood
Just wishing to have you care
Every time i catch you staring
Yet you dont even know i am there

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Do you wanna know a secret?
ive gotten in too fucking deep
My thoughts are filled with only you
Wont your heart ever be mine to keep?

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I guess what im trying to say is
I want a world of just you and me
Now that ive told you everything
Wont you honor me with your company?

~

Ive left my soul lying bare and naked
The pain of wanting is all i feel
I still cry at times ... as I'm left to wilt
Will you ever know i am for real?

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Do you wanna know something?

I like it!

Raw emotion - clever rhyme!

 

[TiberCross]

very descriptive. i liked it alot.

 

[PULS8R]

Awesome and very clever

 

[mariacallas]

its simple and highschoolish ....thank you for liking it

 

[RareForm]

I like it!

 

[cherub]

your pain is definately written out so clearly with this piece you can't help but be touched. Outstanding work!