You Sad Tree

[DeirdreScott]

Every precious word you speak
Drops like a seed
Into my heart
You grow…
You grow roots and take over me
You assimilate
You take control
With silver lullabies
Draw the tears from my eyes
A soft voice trapped
In the wind of the dark and desperate

Assimilate me
And let me crash
Inhale all of me
I want you to breathe my name
You sad tree
Breathe in the poison
And make me clean…

 

[drEaMtiMe*@#]

Every precious word you speak
Drops like a seed
Into my heart
You grow…
You grow roots and take over me

i really like the symbolic imagery which you've used here inorder to explain what it feels like when you start falling for someone.

that's great work.

 

[FixXxer]

that was a very intresting peice.. actually kept my full attention the whole time.
very hard to do.. well done

 

[DeirdreScott]

I'm very pleased with this peice. Not bad for being doped up on hydrocodone and xanaflex. Of course the Bjork in the background probably inspired me more than anything...

 

[RareForm]

perfect for the moment.

 

[beanpoophead]

really nice, i feel like it captures a moment... kind of reminds me of someone talking to me, but seeing inside of me, and knowing every root of me that has grown and made me who i am.

i really like it.

 

[cherub]

it is amazing sometimes when we just take a moment and let go and the moment fills us,, what might come out!

symbolism in this says so much,, great job!

 

[DeirdreScott]

perfect for the moment.

Thanks Rare... You always seem to understand my writes... That's great...

loveu!

 

[DeirdreScott]

Thanks... :D