Wrong Situation

[Tude]

You were perfection, the inflection in your voice
made me rejoice...that twang, dang!
Your personality, in actuality, melted me,
captivating my mind's eye...what a guy!
You, sweet, wonderful you, much too
perfect, juxtaposed with every defect
inherent, evident in me...if only it could be!
You've captivated me like no man before.
Years since I've seen you, and you
are still a frequent thought. I ought
to stop this, it's pointless
to imagine your embrace, your face
next to mine, wanting to lace
my fingers through your mane, your main
attribute, combined with those eyes.
It's been hard to disguise-although wise-
my feelings for you, making me blue.
I've pointlessly, fruitlessly
attempted to erase, replace
superior you with inferior
men-disappointment time and again.
I may pine, but I divine
it's better this way.
It's a shame-there's no blame-
that this can never be, for I can see
that this would be beautiful, laughter plentiful
(marvelous sound),happiness abound.
I will always remember this burning ember
you lit in me, from which I'll never be free.

 

[herbavore]

Wow--it would be great to hear you read this out loud. Is that audio thread still around?

 

[Tude]

Haha thanks! :D

 

[New]

I like this. It's got a real catchy rhythm.

 

[Tude]

Thanks!