word census

[PureLife]

I recognized this bump in my brain
a sticker with a word
soooo fucking vein
(trust me trust me trust me)

you think this meds will help
self-centered people, lined up all ready to yelp
for freedom
stand strong
live long
peace of mind should cure this bind of misery
plagued for years only for an opportunity
to teach what i learned from a pill to cure my brain
society excepted
only to be rejected
because i thought differently
because the way i think, its different
i am different, not proud of it.
but i love it.





wow. probably the worst free flowing words that popped into my head. its not my work. my hands just type away sometimes.

 

[colicolo]

i enjoyed it!

society excepted
only to be rejected
because i thought differently
because the way i think, its different

this easily defines mental health and its stigma.

 

[(Wordy)]

its not my work. my hands just type away sometimes.

Yeah, I know the feeling.

I enjoyed the forks this took... make sure you keep letting your typing hands loose on the keyboard.

 

[drEaMtiMe*@#]

i enjoyed bits of this immensely. overall it is perhaps a little unpolished, but still some great ideas here, and a creative way of expressing them - the first three lines really drew my attention.

good work and keep writing!

 

[Jabberwocky]

Im with colicolo on this one. That was my the part that struck me the most as well.