wip - "My Friend"

[jacquescousteau]

This is a work in progress.. I did my best to format the lines so that the rhythm could be detected, but it is a little strange so you might not pick it up too easy, I dunno.

verse 1
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Stumble on by
I've got no more to give and I
I thought with time you'd realize
Oh, I wish. Oh, I wish.

My friend, I'm..
I'm tired of chasing your backbone
I'm sad to be the one you phone
I know this. I know this...

chorus
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Give me a sign
that you're mostly human
I don't ask for much, do I?
Do I?

A change of your mind
it changes the season
and you thought that you could hide?
could hide?

verse 2
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My birthday
comes and goes, floats right by, and I..
can't help but wonder why I try.
I know this. I know this..

It's clear to those who've
had time to waste on you
that this is, just the way you move.
can't blame you, just for being you.
I know this. I know this..

 

[StuffedTiger]

totally good!

 

[cherub]

agreed very good work, flows nicely

 

[neverwas]

It's clear to those who've
had time to waste on you
that this is, just the way you move.
can't blame you, just for being you.
I know this. I know this..

reminds me of a few people i know