Winds Passing

[cherub]

I get lost looking out that window knowing what I feel has been so under the surface waiting and ready to explode in a storm of whirlwinds of Confusion. Every bit of what I might feel, experience and take in.
Chilling emotions that get twisted back and forth no clarity to be seen. Like the wind storm ready to leap out and grab me. Just mass confusion.
I know I can be so taken in by you , my breathe loosing it's control under your touch lost in the mindless sensations that you bring out in me.
Lust is nothing I want from you. I sat shaking inside and tears that seeped out of my estranged eyes looking out that window when it came to me. That power of emotions Glimmering reflection of who I am and what I have been looking for.
I wait and see what the light will bring as the clouds depart and the winds die down. How I will feel when the winds pass and the truth is out there?
I shudder alittle and think it is the cold winds that have me. Knowing whatever dust settles will be. And I will still be me.
[ 16 December 2001: Message edited by: cherub ]

 

[E-girl]

cherub sweetie, this was really deep and intriguing. it's about 3:30 a.m. and i was just reading through all the poems on the first page, and i was going to comment on a bunch of them tomorrow, but yours stood out and i just had to write my thoughts tonight before i go to sleep.
you always write such soothing things to other people, and i haven't been fortunate enough to read many of your pieces. you put so much feeling, so much emotion, into your writing that it almost explodes with it. nothing like a good poem to leave one breathless, and wanting more.

I know I can be so taken in by you , my breathe loosing it control under your touch lost in the mindless sensations that you bring out in me.
all i can say is wow. you leave me speechless tonight (well, almost).
goodnight.

 

[ice-9]

amazing. i knew you could do it hun.

 

[harraser]

I liked this a lot.

I know I can be so taken in by you , my breathe loosing it's control under your touch lost in the mindless sensations that you bring out in me.
Lust is nothing I want from you.
Ive felt like that so many times, you cant resist when theyre there but when you look back you think to yourself "I didnt want sex, I want love"...hmmmmmm
nice work