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[knight_marshall]

You will be happy.
You will be sad.
You will be peaceful.
You will be mad.

You will remember.
You will forget.
You will gain credit.
You will gain debt.

Happily remeber your credit.
Forget your debt and be sad.
At peace when debt is forgotten.
A credit to those that are mad.

These are all things that will happen
and are going to happen to you.
Regardless of just how you see it
it's true from at least one point of view.

So why do you bother to fight it,
to be in control of the way you behave.
Surely by now you have figured out that
to rebel is to admit you're a slave.

 

[(Wordy)]

So why do you bother to fight it,
to be in control of the way you behave.
Surely by now you have figured out that
to rebel is to admit you're a slave.

Great stanza, great ending!

I can see this whole piece working brilliantly as song lyrics. Was that your intention?

 

[knight_marshall]

i started it without intention, but yes, by the last stanza i was thinking about Rage Against the Machine rap style singing

 

[(Wordy)]

Yeah, I can definitely hear them working in that style!

 

[Mehm]

I like the simplicity and repition. Are you in debt or something?

 

[knight_marshall]

well, i did just get a credit card i've been abusing a little , but nope, i'm pretty sure i don't really owe anyone anything i can't easily give back