Why can't you see

[RaVeN_pkfl]

Why can't you see?
Why can't you see how deeply I love you?
Why can't you see there is nothing in this world I wouldn't do for you?
Why can't you see my heart ripping into pieces from loving you?
Why can't you see we were ment to be?
Why can't you see I have ALWAYS been there for you?
Why can't you see it is impossible to care for anyone other than you?
Why can't you see the soul inside that is crying from lonelyness?
Why can't you see I will NEVER hurt you?
Why can't you see he does not love you?
Why can't you see he only wants you?
Why can't you see he will only hurt you?
Why can't you see you belong with me?
Oh yes, I remember now. You only know how to see with your eyes and not with your heart.
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This is my first time ever actually trying to write something. Personaly I have never thought I can write anything remotely good so please tell me exactly what you think, good or bad. Thanks

 

[CyaLuvyaBye]

ooh ive been hear how the heart aches
to me i like poetry that speaks to me that makes me FEEL and yes yours does that keep up the writing babe
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i thought it was you i needed nevertheless i have learnt thru the pain i needed me

 

[5FACES]

Poetry makes a person think in a different light about something and yours definetly jerked emotions about the reality of love.
KEEP WRITING