Who I Am, first time posting, please read, short poem!

[TwisteTexan]

I'm not want you want or expected from me, Sorry to disapoint this is all I can be.

My hairs a little shaggy and tattoos a little dark, You can call it want you want I call it art.

Some think I'm different or even a little strange, But one thing for sure I will never change.

I'm a little outspoken or even a little blunt, I would just rather be honest than put on a front.

You just dont know the thoughts in my head, Thats why at night I toss and turn in bed.

I struggle with my demons and all of the pain, But dealing with reality is just such a strain.

I just wanted everyone to know, That there is more behind these eyes than ill ever show.
-Bust

 

[manic_panic]

very nice, man. i can relate to it. its very straightforward and honest, heartfelt No-B.S. style, which is always worth credibility. keep it up, keep your flow. don't stick to one subject but expand on the universality shared within all of us, something EVERYONE can relate to. this is a good start though. peace love harmony

 

[blairbear0]

Awsome. Keep writing.

 

[izzy66]

encore, encore!
good start. keep writing.