Who cares

[BrightEyesIsMe]

I walked through the room again tonight
Did you notice me?
I know you did not
You probably thought a breeze just gave you goose bumps
I tried to talk to you
I tried to be there for you
You did not listen and you did not care
I heard your heart speaking
But I was now dead to you
So why can I hear your heart and not be able to help you?
I don't know if you deserve it
But I do love you
You have been in my life since I can remember
You are what helps my life keep going
You have given me love when I was alone
You have given me help when I could not do things by myself
You gave me a warm place in your heart to be,
any time I wanted
But one day you became cold and looked down on me
Then you did not even see me
What did I do to you?
How was it my fault?
I never turned away from you
And I certainly always cared
So please just tell me, what is wrong?
MDCS&E

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Wow, this piece pulls on so many heart strings. I feel your pain on many levels.....This piece brings a tear to my eye.

 

[Scrooge'sOldLady19]

The sound of a breaking heart...is that what I hear? Such a sweet piece. Very cool that you ask questions like so instead of just "wondering."

 

[cherub]

Reminds me a child talking to a parent,,, always seems to be the issue at some point in a childs life... i think it is great as all your writtings

 

[RareForm]

agreed. this is one of yours i can actually relate to.