who are you

[raverchik]

who(were) are you?

I think I found you once or twice
Last week I even thought I saw you, walking aimlessly in the street
But you didnt look back, You never do

Everyday I wonder what you look like, what colour your eyes are, what hand you write with, what perfume you wear
..water traces itself down my palms and I wonder how u take your coffee
should I start practicing in case I get it wrong?

...These minor details I cloud my mind with will never wear thin with me

If your waiting, please dont I dont know how long I'll be
when I catch the bus, train or walk to work I'll look for your smile
misadventures, misadventures steaming, steamin down.

I'll look for you.. but who are you?

 

[up all night]

This was great! Melancholy and subtly moving.

 

[Beagle]

Everyday I wonder what you look like, what colour your eyes are, what hand you write with, what perfume you wear
..water traces itself down my palms and I wonder how u take your coffee
should I start practicing In case I get it wrong?

This part stood out to me RC cause it reminded me of how I used to be when I actually had the balls to go after girls. I remember wanting to know everything about a few certain girls I really liked at the time. Simple things just like you listed too.


I thought the end part too was cool. I dunno, it just sounded so "poetic." I know that's a lame adjective to use for it but I can't think of any other way to describe it heh. I liked it though RC, very cool Kinda conjured up some nostalgic memories for me ...