White

[beanpoophead]

Your always told me
that I’d knew
and now im here
desperate
spread out in circles
dusted
from all the corners
of my green room

and now i think
just the smell
could get me off
sprinkle the white
and cover my dreams
and thoughts
or all the things
that would of been
over

white
feeding the brain
over and over again
make it pound
heart beating
falling out of my
lack of chest
and you saw it
in the eyes
of my pain

i told you a story
the one of my life
except
it wasnt over
just then
no, now its begun
and spun down
killing me
not so softly

 

[cherub]

well written i like how it is basically two stories in one ,,,,, well that is my impression,,,,,,, good luck *hugs*

 

[E-girl]

different! and those last 2 lines... brilliant ending.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

very nice, I loved the way it was written.

 

[beanpoophead]

thanks guys :D