White Downfall

[5FACES]

White coated walls
has become your prison,
I see as I tap my foot.
Time doesn't even have a face anymore.
"Only one more setup and I'm out."
But I laugh,
past words always recurring.
You say it used to be my prison,
not i'm not the one caught in the drift
of a white blizzard.
Looking out windows,
pacing back and forth,
Trapped beneath my own skin
that sweats.....
Every second of every minute of EVERY DAY!
Black eyes
I looked at the Devil
face to face.
A cracked mirror lies on the table
traces of past fights.
Back hand
touching your pale, clamy skin.
"I'm sick again, another cold."
But I laugh,
i've itched my palms before
with anxiety.
Sniffing your nose,
You turn off the lights and
reach into the wall.
I gotta go......
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before love there are
memories of innonence.
after there are none...

 

[Noodle]

Wow. Another fine construction by you.

I'll be reading this one over and over; I'm obsessive like that.

[This message has been edited by Noodle (edited 16 November 2001).]

 

[RavinRaych]

And you also write very amazing poems.

I will be sure to read more of your writings!
"no i'm not the one caught in the drift
of a white blizzard.
Looking out windows,
pacing back and forth,
Trapped beneath my own skin " beautiful

plurr
raychul

 

[alykitty]

As always, 5FACES, awesome work..I enjoy your posts emencely

 

[Aja909]

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"On something, somewhere at all times"
"I was always stereotyped as a lost cause--> so I became one and dealt with the side effects--> now people bang on my door and call me at random hours just to see if I'm alive and stuff"

 

[Mellabopper]

you're becoming one of my favorites writers in this forum

Mella

 

[amber ::]

your words are truly beautiful