White Doves Taking Flight

[drug_wench]

i wrote this wiv the help of 2 white doves
i always try 2 write deep meaningful shit on drugs but usually just end up writing an ode 2 wateva ive taken

I don't know who you are
But I want you here forever
Can you look into my eyes
And help me get my soul together?
Drive me crazy with your dance
And when you stop I just want more
Am I the only one so dizzy
I am falling to the floor?
Now my pupils are dilated
They're the reason that I see
In so many multi-colours
That I lose a sense of me
And as I rage with you tonight
Will you remember my soft touch?
Although I don't know who you are
Right now I love you very much
We're like naughty Eve and Adam
Stealing pill-fruits from life's tree
But the night has only started
In the arms of Ecstasy

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

I like this nvertheless, gives that feeling of asking your drug "will you always feel like this, are you real?"

Perhaps write on the comedown and see if it gives any more introspection!

 

[m4dd0g]

Theres a few bits i really liked , especially:

"They're the reason that I see
In so many multi-colours
That I lose a sense of me"

I just like how it flowed and captured a true sense of that exact feeling

 

[cherub]

drug writting seem to always seem to be alittle more poetic... maybe cause it is drugs lol

but it did come out smooth and sweet !

 

[RareForm]

"right now i love you very much" :D