whispered entropy

[Prolapstriumph]

A wisp of smoke drifted
out the window into a sandstorm,
and dispersed amongst the countless grains
declared infinite domain
in that delicate moment.

 

[hydroazuanacaine]

rocknroll. short and solid. pretty without any frills (other than the title).

but why "declared" instead of "declaring?"

 

[Mehm]

^^the poem is in past tense.

great read. Thanks

 

[New]

Ultimately powerful.