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AmmutTheDevourer

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Can you hear the glass shatter?
The silence that follows is much louder. Angels whisper as temptation rules the devils finest hour.
Dark shawdows seem to be busy with painfulness chatter.
Secrets of untold truth have yet to be spoken.
But can you hear them... the angels they still do whisper.
- What good courtesy it would be to hear of what you thought...
 
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Although this is probably SOOOOO irrelevant to you, this piece seems to be the perfect continuation to very "unfinished" piece I read on here earlier about someone looking in the mirror and the reflection not representing the truth of who they really are and what they have become. The two are like yin and yang and together make a COMPLETE scary revaluation. It reminds me of the freaky movie that came out called "The Ring". I'm paralyzed with fear! That damn commercial was just images of decrepit things with a puzzling stagnate chilling quote "When you die you see the ring" it wasn't until a month later that they added more footage which THEN explained that it was a movie. Wooo was I relieved.
The connection is that when I read the above work of complex wording I can picture all kinds of disturbing things. Like it's a perfect monologue of desolation...dark aftermath or dreadful foreshadowing. (pant pant) "Secrets of untold truth have yet to be spoken. But can you hear them... the angels they still do whisper." it's Edger Allen Poe insanity. More More More!
AND WHO IS YOUR EX?
[ 05 November 2002: Message edited by: Jungle Bunny ]
 
First an fore most I do apperciate your grattitude for my work... I have noticed that you reply to my works.... no one really get them but you and my friends which I explain them to anyway..... I would like to know of what piece that my work seems to continue on I am most intrested in what you say. The boy you speak of.... is not really quiet an ex.... we dated but "ex" seemed to be alot more convenient to just use that term... But anyway that person would be xseptiontotherule..... I believe thats how he spells it..... I have one other question..... Why is it that you go and search for my work and reply to things no longer on the front or next after pages? Sorry it just seems as if your someone I know, or to be more exact you know me and I do not realize this yet..... could be, it could be.
 
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I love your work and I will reply to them :) not alot of people reply to mine..... actually this poem is very old, junngle bunny just dug it out of the archives
 
this was brilliant.
i'm a big believer in silence sometimes being louder than anything else.
your words are beautiful.
 
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