Where will it end

[GillyWin]

incomprehensable
blearily recognisable
the pain
numbness my companion

sequences of time mean nothing
but another day
month
year

theres no way back
no way forward
the present is meaningless

the facade is an addictioin
the pain induring infliction
The urge in my desire
only enebriates the fire

Escapism means nothing
being this far in
a normailty i crave
other than this

 

[onetwothreefour]

this:

Originally posted by GillyWin
sequences of time mean nothing
but another day
month
year

theres no way back
no way forward
the present is meaningless

the facade is an addictioin

is my favourite part. i particularly like the line "the facade is an addiction". i understand that all too well.

and i like the contradiction that isn't (that totally doesn't make sense, but work with me here, i'm sleep-deprived ) in the "time means nothing ... but" part, too.

nice work

 

[cherub]

Definately a good read,,,, i feel you on this when i read this, definately great choices of words !

 

[NickyJ]

fuck

 

[onetwothreefour]

fucking haunting

 

[Raving Loony]

 

[KemicalBurn]

please remind me to get you guys to archive this

 

[RareForm]

perfectly worded. all of our thoughts i'm sure.

 

[neverwas]

Someone should copy this to Bluelight Shrine

Such a beautiful peice from such a beautiful person.

Rest Peacefully.

 

[Mary Poppins]

reading this is quite eerie.