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when i drink i wanna write

just sayin hi.

okay i'm drunk, an' i come jump this thread,
show you how its done, show how its said,
instead,
of you prattlin' all the time
how about you say something worth reading inya lines.
rhyme, that's easy to do
but rhythm, you need practice that's true-
try my shoe, get yours outta ya mouth
or i come fired up and boot ya from down south...
in the arse
coz your crappin's a farse,
i burn rubber when i fire up the car.
disaster, diseased faster,
take a little lesson from the spgeddi master.
in more than the kitchen,
coz my shit's bitchin,
and you need schoolin' and i'm here to serve the pasta.
reverand, never end,
practice makes perfect then like me youll get better and,
more,
spgeddi cuttin bananas on the floor.
ba na nah, ba na nah, ba na nah, ba na naanah
ba na nah, ba na nah, ba na nah, ba na naanah
 
im more then the kitchen? how drunk are u

i was smashed when i first wrote
but damn you must be wasted
u have no room to talk about rhyme
come on, lets face it
im more then the kichen?
and my shits bitchin?
thats about as entertaining
as my nuts itching
your shit makes no sense
keep cuttin banannas on the floor
but please save yourself
and just dont reply no more
dont make my shit look bad
we can start a new thread
and ill leave blood all over that bitch
as red as my fuckin head
im the one bringin' the sickness
what u know bout disease
im sicker then cancer patients
livin' without green leaves
that canabis sativa
kid im a headach reliever
and my shits so hot
ill proubly give that ass a fever
and make u a believer
thinkin' u saw the light
or i just make u look dumb
wishin' u werent drinkin' on that night
somebody call a real doctor
not this wannabe spgeddi
and please seal them lips
less u wanna see my machette
my shits heavy
and it goes real deep
i spit more dope shit on this thread
and most with no sleep
enough with the clowing
like i said start a new topic
this is for flawless rhymes
showing people like u how to drop it!



start a new thread if u wanna clown. this is for crituqe or whatever. ill be more then happy to murder u on how ever many pages u want. as long as u want. just not here. at least someone is replying though :) not hatin though. im glad sumone said sum shit. so if ya want. bring it :P respect ~damoN~
 
^^ Dude, just read your first post where you say that this isn't rap.
The structure of his lyrics is a typical 4/4 structure for rap, who cares what beat he did it to, I was just trying to make a constructive comment. Lyrics are lyrics, whether they were done to slow ass hip hop beat or a jungle tempo.
As for jungle being way above rap, grow up.
 
back up....the real slim shady has spoken. when it comes to hip hop..this guy is run, D, M, but he just can C. dont limit yourself to hip hop. i got more shit then that. thanks for feedback though. heh. really. glad to see people are reading. and lyrics are lyrics i suppose. they are to be taken however the person wants. im just a bass head, i <3 beats, snares, kicks, and bass.

my.jungle.like.whoa

~damoN~
 
enogh bullshit..back to writing

im not too worried about people
cause with them ive had enough
and you cant please them all
especially with my kinda luck
so i bring forth a shade tree
and block them from my eyes
fill my head up with happy thoughts
and lace it full of lies
tonite i have plans ahead
to drink my worries away
but really that just fade for a second
knowing they are here to stay
ive never cared what people think
cause ive never been like the rest
i just write to get shit off my mind
with no intentions of being the best
hip hop is full of phonies
i dont care about gettin signed
this is more like poetry, deep
how many times must i remind
rewind my thought collection
and shatter this thing we call ego
on the scale of 1 to 10 id say
peoples respect has gotten a zero
im not here to be a hero
cause really who wants be be saved
im just here to speak my mind
talk jungle, and misbehave
i been on bluelight for quite sumtime
really just check the date
but u can be a greenlighter
just keep it real, and ill relate
im still not at home yet
and really im thinkin of not goin back
only thing i really miss
is my bedtime blunt and a chronic sack
i cant believe the things ive saw
and over the years the things ive heard
if i went into every deatil
you'd say i lie, and its absurd
living life and shit is hot
it must be cause im in hell
with my gurl, its like heaven
without her, back to the burning smell
cause the worlds is on fire
and the smoke is too thick
its gettin hard to breathe
everyones a liar
and full of so much shit
that it makes me wanna leave
so goodbye world and all reality
no i will not be coming back
unless i got a hand grenade
comin at you like a runnin back
BUCK BUCK blast at last
my.jungle. still be .like.whoa
BUCK BUCK past that ass
im speedin like NITRO
dont get left behind in the world. this thread has a long life ahead of it. dont hate me for what i do. i just write. i made up all these except maybe 1 or so as i went. so dont hate. if u are here to comment with negativity and just trying to clown. do so on a new thread. or take your beef up with me thru PM or sumpin. or just come to my city..fuck. i plan on making this thread a collection of my thoughts and rhymes. and i plan on it goin to 666 pages. or at least 20. heh =D


till next time. same jungle bizzle. same tele vizzle. same ol D DIZZLE. as always...off the mu fuckin chain. like whut.

8o ~damoN~8o
 
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Lol, don't worry man, I don't limit myself to hip hop, there's plenty of more shit that I like.
Maybe you can answer this for me, I've been getting into drum and bass lately, stuff like Aphex Twin, Venetian Snares etc, loving it! But what's the difference between jungle and drum and bass?? Fill me in, I'm new to this whole thing.

Keep elevatin'
 
unfortunately i think your thread has a life of its own.
its a public forum, and it pleases me to join in, just as it pleases me to enjoy reading. we'll celebrate your 20th page with my next post. enjoy :)
 
im still workin on it ;)

i been going thru sum court shit. i wrote all that when i was staying in columbus with my ex gurl. my comp has been fuked up . but ill be around. but im bumpin this old ass thread cause i just read it again and i respect spagetti and i dont remember reading that post about celebrating my 20th page. im gonna get this shit crackin', but i was hoped up on meth most of those poems/raps and liquor. and im clean now. but i havent lost it. i was just in this state of mind i cant describe for that month...now im girl less, and clean due to probation. it would take a week or so of no sleep filled with liquor and great sex all the time to get on that level. heh. but dont think i dont still got it. so BUMP!!! and REEEEEEEESPECT ~damoN~
 
Seems like rap's often pretty formulaic: unprovoked threats, delusions of grandeur, braggart talk, supposed "wisdom" etc. etc. Not a criticism, but an observation.
Your lyrics are good.
 
soon, cause i been using my neighbors computer, ive got lots in the works...i like poetry better then writng rap, cause i can just freestyle dumb shit easier. i like my shit to be a lil deeper. thank u all though. this thread is so old. ~damoN~
 
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