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what i feel

alostlittlebird

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first time sharing cause it was pouring out like sweet wine :)

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ive got a feeling
yeah a feeling, what a feeling
hit the ceiling
broken through, gotta find you
where are you, where am i?

one sec,,

you're an angel with a magnitude
adjust my attitude
ill crawl the latitude
just to find you, just to find myself
i think i think uh huh

i think i love you
i think i do
i think i do
so where are you?
now/

twisting and burning and yearning
and the earth is still turning
hardly noticed, hardly knew
only you, you're the love and the wings
i put them on and flew

now im running to catch you
i can catch you i will snatch you
up
and put you in my car
so we can drive real far
to the movies, to the restaurants
all bottled up, yeah this feeling all crammed up
shoved it in a jar but the lid is loose
and the bottle is shaking
and quaking
and breaking
shouldnt we be somewhere, all wrapped up
in our sweet love making?
yeah you're mine for the taking
uh huh, uh huh

i think i love you
i think i do
i'm sure i do
so where are you?
now!

yes i know you've been here
why did i take so long?
cuz im nervous and im scared but now that im prepared
rest, rest, rest

yeah you're my angel with a magnitude
adjusted my attitude
i crawled the latitude
there you were all along all the time all the while
that one quick smile, all it took and my heart is a pile
on the floor

im sick today but tomorrow i am out the door
a few hours more
and you're all mine

and the love comes pouring out
yes it's sweet, sweet wine :)

4/2/03 jsmith
 
alostlittlebird said:

twisting and burning and yearning
and the earth is still turning
hardly noticed, hardly knew
only you, you're the love and the wings
i put them on and flew

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shouldnt we be somewhere, all wrapped up
in our sweet love making?

i like this...well done for a early peice of your writting... :)
 
thank you ;)

this particular poem is supposed to have music with it, so it helps to imagine it as a rhythmical song - hence some of the simplicity and repetition
 
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