water. + two small poems

[Chaotic Action Man]

i like the rain
with it’s always
have to be somewhere
else attitude.

it assumes
self importance,
downplays its
nature
always running
following a course.

it developed
many interesting names:
sea, ocean, lake,
and created,
within partnership,
fiords, valleys, and shoals.

it is the greatest recycler
cleanser pacifier and
ultimate annoyer
as any side walk warrior
can attest to.

it can fly
fall, rebound and
repel.
it is expensive
invaluable
malleable and
tasty
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for gala

when memories
are torn and frayed,
where the fragments
require the assistance
of professional experts
simply to hold them
into the head of an old man,
i will carry a smile
when memories of you
are all that remain.
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'private siezure'

i want
to appropriate your personal ass ets
you resist...

it is futile.

 

[StuffedTiger]

this is really good shit, another example of good shit on it's way to getting burried. At first I was going to tell you the first poem was too choppy because the way the stanzas are layed out, but after reading it I love it. It makes the words fall like rain.

 

[Evlorin]

I love how you finish up the first one, i love the second one as well, i hope i can end up like that. Anywho the third i'm not sure i got but yeah first two were great good work *clap clap clap*

 

[Chaotic Action Man]

the last one was more of a joke. it was written into the end of an email i sent to my ex-wife after we split. sort of a tongue in cheek thing, but also half meant. thanks for the kind words you two.

 

[neverwas]

nice. they r all different from each other. you only improove with each thingof urs i read