Walked away....

[crshnbrn200]

Why can't I for once
have that which
lifts me
above all the quagmire
and darkness.

To experience for the rest of my life
that completion
content in
his arms.

Why must it be this way
forever beating down
this undeniable force.
It cries out for recognition
reciprocation.

I look for
you look away.
It's never right
never the same.

You have always walked
away.

 

[cherub]

I feel your pain in this ,, it comes out quite clear. it is a very raw and strong piece with the simplity of it all carrying through... great work

 

[crshnbrn200]

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback, good news is things are looking better all the time........