Wake up

[realm]

independantly i breathe the silence
im free here
totally and utterly free to explore
my mind is the gateway to the wilderness
pain, pleasure, madness, all brewing
on the brink of death brings me closer to god
i hope i dont get lost
the clearest sense of vision is when my eyes are closed
open
close
back to the stream from which i came
the world is at my fingertips with every blink
there are no boundaries here
im only limited with my eyes open
close
if life were a dream this is where i'd be
my senses in such a state of arousal
knowing i can lose touch with reality
with the blink of an eye
open
close
if life were a dream, id want to wake up
i've got alot of work to do

 

[RareForm]

if life were a dream, id want to wake up
i've got alot of work to do

what an end. very insightful, i like the way you think.

 

[realm]

haha i like the way YOU think bro, thanks

 

[(Wordy)]

Yeah that ending is magic!

my mind is the gateway to the wilderness

Awesome line. I found the whole thing very empowering to read.

 

[Riot Grrrl]

the clearest sense of vision is when my eyes are closed

Amazing piece of writing.
It's dreaming like that, which makes me never want to wake up

 

[realm]

thanks so much for the responses!