vows.

[rewiiired]

Read my vows here all alone,
took the blade, I etched in stone
and stained with blood
all that I've known,
then the wind and water
weathered it and I don't know
till I make it home
to the fire that burns within
how to atone and to begin
to let go of
who I've been
and swallow
the echoes
of all the voices
that I've thrown.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

I'm going to say it again, you have gift, the way you can take these feelings, make them into images and find the perfect words to describe them.

I have been in a similar headspace, where I need to reconcile just who it is that I am.

 

[yakksoho]

Its just beautiful...you have an unmatched eloquence

 

[Cosmic Mist]

Such sadness, but such beautiful imagery. Complex ideas in simple words. Nice.

 

[plazma]

This is one of the most strikingly beautiful pieces of poetry that I have read for some time. You have done an absolutely brilliant job.

-plaz out-

 

[(Wordy)]

^^^ What they said.

Beautiful work.