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Vipers and Vixens, Vitriolic and Vivacious

kazza_baby

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Most guys think you’re delightful—
A tattered trinket,
Unlucky charm.
Eyes of steel catch them flicker
Never in a lifetime.

Apathy around a staggering stare
To nowhere in particular
Just so you slice through
The rising walls
Or a little girl’s star.

Dead as the empty classrooms
And the missing windows of your brick room.
Are lips cold and pale from the absence of a smile?
The absence of a kiss?
Darling, you’re not taking mine.

Not with your practiced innocence
Of sleepless nights in the toilet and malodorous dreams
Nor with the silent signals of your hasty heart
That misses a beat too soon
To notice what you’ve done.

You’re the viper in my closet
Poised to attack but be ready to recoil.
Most guys think you’re delightful,
But I see you as a threat.
And this send-off note is read aloud,
The lines have run out,
Along with your last breath.
 
^ Be careful what you wish for. ;)

Kazza, there are some amazing lines in this. It's venomous... and fully visible (as per usual with your work). :)
 
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