Verse/poem thing....

[Khadijah]

but you had to take off,
starry eyed and dope struck
outa luck so what,
down town, doped up
If i could see you now id teach you how to stay up
drag ya out the car, smack ya face and tell ya straight up
got half a mind to grab ya by the hair,
needles everywhere
cryin like get offa me, snatch ya ass up off the streets
wanna stay like that, blow ya vein steady missin
leave behind ya little sisters everyday ya on ya mission
down on on broadway, went the wrong way a long way
after everything ya did to get out,
one dick, next fix

everything is still in a in a slow movin feen's dream
blurry livin day to day,
surface sparkles years away
chop off slices of ya life when no ones lookin
day by day you fade it out
got ya spoon already cookin......


Just some shit off the top of my mind... no beginning no end, just picked up in the middle, maybe part of somethin else, who knows thats it for now. inspired by tru life.

 

[(Wordy)]

I really like it. You're right, it starts right in the middle, in the heat of the moment. It's a raw, real and powerful piece with tight delivery.

 

[colicolo]

this is a great short sharp wake up call

leave behind ya little sisters everyday ya on ya mission

its descriptive and intelligent but doesn't beat around the bush.
fantastic

 

[Khadijah]

thanks yall who bothered to reply. thanks for takin notice.

 

[jaymie]

love this flow. its very real to me.