Veridical Dirge

[RareForm]

I've surrendered to this
armored abattoir.

Some sort of pseudomorph
Tranquility inaccessible...

I'm in quicksand:
Numb and sinking,

I've attempted to placate,
Only to be poisoned.

I've been eliminated
A nonentity.

Flying Incognito...
I can barely see the stars.

 

[mariacallas]

beautiful as always

 

[neverwas]

excellent nicely put together.

 

[StuffedTiger]

this made me get my dictionary out

not that i needed it

not bad, sometimes i can barely see the stars or I think their moving or not there at all when infact they're as plain as polka dots. i think... or are they moving again?

nice work

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

very nice there doll

 

[DG]

I'm in quicksand:
Numb and sinking,

 

[skjalff]

Man, your lexicon does not stop amazing me!!! Abattoir.. I need to remember that.. when I read this the first time, I had absolutely no idea what this word might mean (boudoir.. or something)).. but after i looked it up, the whole poem instantly got this bordeaux tint to it...
as always, startling mastery of the language!




skjalff

 

[Altered_Soul9]

This is amazing as always. Very Nice