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apollo

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Location
sydney
armour shields no blow from within
callus skin that sheltered a fragile heart
now bounds a burning misery
slowly seeping through as tears

still the sun rises and clouds roll by
yet the new day forgot to bring you?
nature the mother of agony
fails to acknowledge it

pain with the weight of a millstone
incomprehensible - passers by dont notice?
strange it seems that world still turns
when all its might tears my heart in two
 
And it was then
That she realised
All she needed to say was
...I'm sorry.

But the night was cold
And her intentions cool
A nasty combination
When she really does care.

So don't cry over girls
unworthy
They'll break your heart
And forget to say...

I'm sorry.
 
what the world giveth, the world taketh away... it's a cycle :)

The good thing is that it will start all over again, maybe not today, maybe not tomorrow... but one day - not so far away :)
 
everything happens for a reason... :\ we dont have any control over what the next day will bring. but day after day it gets easier.

apollo: hun i really liked this peice and it made me cry a little. the pain in it and confusion was well identified with.

*hugs hun*
 
This is as sweet as it is sad Apollo;
I can only assume what inspired your words,
but whatever the case, keep on your feet man.
You'll always have your friends and yourself.


"What is past is prologue"
- Shakespeare
 
*hands you both tissues*

Look to friends... for support... there always there.

Good pieces of writing tho guys... such a shame its a situation like this that they were written on account of though. :(
 
While I'm guessing you'd rather not be writing these words, you write well apollo.

Take care of yourself.

Kat :)
 
After reading this poem. It seems to be words from a refrain so often thought that it's well nigh universal.

Apollo, you are, when you choose to be, a master of the english language, written or spoken. Your piece is somewhat raw, but that's as I suspect its meant to read.

"Sorry" is but bitter ashes in the dust of history...

-plaz out-
 
Muchos hugs to you Apollo.

up all night said:
Sorry is the difference between showing you care and turning your back.
Click to expand...

agreed. And those that matter will see that.
 
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