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[Frosty da snowman]

join me now in the great dance
as we sway to the ancient rhythm of chance
lady ifni holds each hand as we stand in the circle of life
she leads us in a chant to summon the great old ghost father time
we seek passage
we follow a blinding light along an unknown course we know not if this adventure will be great or small
we packed light
Only one among us knows how this journey will end
she answers no questions, but does not leave us
she dances among our ranks
picking us up when we fall
weeping when we cannot go on
but never warning us of what maybe
sweet ifni has opened her arms
but when will she grace us with her voice
[ 05 April 2002: Message edited by: Frosty da snowman ]

 

[harraser]

wow thats beautiful.....I cant think of anything else to say but "beautiful"

 

[Fetish Jester]

we packed light
Man, that just says it all. That one line just summed up exactly what (I think) you were on about. It leapt out at me.
Could you do another one in the same theme? I like the subject matter.

 

[Frosty da snowman]

Originally posted by Fetish Jester:

Could you do another one in the same theme? I like the subject matter.
umm, here you go kinda close to the orginal post. again no title
There’s a little voice in my head whispering suggestions but never advice
Door one or door two
Both an experience bad or good the voice doesn’t care
It only cares that I make a choice
The voice sometimes laughs with me smiling at some great moment after a good choice
Other times we weep or cry out in pain if I make a bad one,
The voice is never sorry it made the suggestion though
Sometimes nothing much happens and you can feel the frustration the next time it speaks
I’d feel like a puppet
But there are no strings
Just the soft voice pushing me into the maelstrom

 

[American Girl]

You are deep snowman! I love how eloquently your words flow togehter! Keep it up!