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[yakksoho]

Words are starting to repeat themselves
Like rain
Gossamer
Wings
Flap
Blindly
Against
My
Heart
Fire is starting to repeat itself
In darkness
Cannibals
Imitate
Flames
Flapping
Madly
To
The
Beat
Nighttime is starting to repeat itself
At daybreak
Fireflies
Turn
Invisible
As
Coffee
Weeps
Silently
Into
Milk
Sound is starting to repeat itself
Echoing through laughter
Strings
Chords
Mandolins
Coughing
Tires
Imitate
The
Chatter
Of
Birds
Rise
Rise
Rise
Life is starting to repeat itself
The crackle of new paper
Fibre
After
Fibre
Pulls
Tendon
After
Tendon
Hearts
Puppet
Achingly
Capillaries
Are
Strings
©16.12.01

 

[Shuddr2Think]

i really like the way you wrote this...
what can i say, i am a sucker for individual style.
Good Job...

 

[spinkle]

That's fantastic Well done!

 

[Noodle]

:D

 

[Teleport]

I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing.

 

[yakksoho]

Thanks for all your comments. Its funny though how the only poem of mine you guys have liked is the one that I wrote badly on purpose to be about _un_originality.
an odd bunch, but cheers to you all