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[oceandreams]

Gloomy days covered in gray
as the skies spew forth with the tears from my eyes
Such stagnant emptiness as if
the world itself feels this formidable loneliness
I sit and gaze silently out of my tear stained window
as my testament of pain seems to wash it all away
Taking with it the sewage of my contaminated soul
Abandoned in the silence of my screams
I pray with such longing
that this passion no longer encumbers my heart

 

[smoothchili]

im impressed

 

[oceandreams]

thanks honey, it was raining in colorado today. felt inspired

 

[drEaMtiMe*@#]

Originally posted by oceandreams
Gloomy days covered in gray
as the skies spew forth with the tears from my eyes
Such stagnant emptiness as if
the world itself feels this formidable loneliness
I sit and gaze silently out of my tear stained window

i love the analogy you draw between crying eyes and watching rain fall on windows. very nicely inspired and beautifully written.

 

[oceandreams]

once again i thank you