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[SweetMaddie]

So, I am a little nervous about the reaction I am going to get so I am posting under an alias...I know you guys are so accepting but I am a big baby.... I hope you like it...
your blank stare
chattering jaw
do you see me
standing before you
i try to comfort you
let me help
just stay here
with me
you ask
don't leave
the night is endless
like your use
bump
tab
bump, again...
just for fun
when does it end?
excess
unconcious
i hold your heavy frame
gently tracing your strong features
with my tenative fingers
you are beautiful
you are out of control
you are losing you
you are losing me
i am losing you
i am losing myself.....

 

[Genavieve515]

I can totally see where you are coming from, whatever is bothering you, I hope it works out.

 

[5FACES]

It touches a part of my life that has ended. It's beautiful.

 

[Ashke]

Oooohhh... this is really good. Now I am curious who you really are. Anyway thanks for sharing it.. I understand how it can be scary to share work that means something deeply to you.
~*~ Ashke ~*~

 

[bLaHs]

*claps*
it has a great feeling...
very clear, yet hidden!~
i'm liking it

 

[RaVeN_pkfl]

Thats good. I'm going through the same thing. I can be holding someone so close to me but they are so far away. I am loosing her and at the same time I am loosing myself. I don't like this feeling. Good job though

 

[COLEY555]

BEAUTIFUL!!!

 

[XmarXthespot]

I think what sweet maddie is trying to say in that poem is that she is losing someone close to her to drugs they seem to be drifting them apart but she doesn't want that she is there trying to help but the person is not there to see her help. Anyway that is a beautiful poem. I hope that everything turns out for the best.
"what goes up, must come down, no not me clowns"