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[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

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A silvered paste
Climbs the walls
Of her charred and static insides.

Emotions migrate
Furred and covered
Running with the tide.

Sparks hang low
Dotting the dark
Reaping a heavied mood.

A pair of eyes
Dipped to wait
Hollowed through the moon.

 

[RareForm]

good poem.

 

[Dandy]

A pleasure to read.
You know my thoughts about this.
One of your best pieces.
Fantastic imagery.

"A pair of eyes
Dipped to wait
Hollowed through the moon."
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^^ Love this, I'm understanding it a little more now.

 

[Raz]

I love reading your stuff COTB, cause it's all perfectly visual, but I have to read it a few times to unravel what it means to me...I really really like this a lot.

 

[cherub]

very nice

 

[frostyangel]

you got a nice collection of short reads.. I like them..