'untitled'

[Chaotic Action Man]

smile.
big and wide
like a lion yawning.

now imagine me
hugging you,
holding tight,
firm yet light,
and the two of us
feeling like we are,
and we are,
floating.

when i touch your stomach
i feel like i have found
the source of a river.
it gives life
and takes pain,
transforming it
into light

you are precious.
invaluable.
beautiful beyond words,
and simply,
but never simple,
my very best friend.

thanks can never say it.
kisses can never show it.
a lifetime it will take to express it.
and a lifetime i am willing to give it.

thank you for being there
at the moment i needed you the most.
and though we did not know,
could not know
that we were there for a reason,
we still took it all the same.

we defy my words,
leave me speechless,
when all i wanted to say,
was already said a thousand life times ago

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

smile.
big and wide
like a lion yawning.

^OMG. This is amazing...just beautiful!
The simple imagery is just so touching, and pure..
This really appeals to me. Reminds me of the special people in my life.

Dandy - - - I read this line, and thought of you, immediately.

 

[Dekloren]

That's like.....Brought tears to my eyes....Dude!

 

[neverwas]

you are precious.
invaluable.
beautiful beyond words,
and simply,
but never simple,
my very best friend.

thanks can never say it.
kisses can never show it.
a lifetime it will take to express it.
and a lifetime i am willing to give it.

thank you for being there
at the moment i needed you the most.
and though we did not know,
could not know
that we were there for a reason,
we still took it all the same.

your writtingis beatiful. i always try to tell stuff like this to the specail people i love and they always get embarrassed...but i love being so open

 

[cherub]

very sweet and preious is more of the word i think,,,

great stuff~

 

[up all night]

Originally posted by Chaotic Action Man
we defy my words,
leave me speechless,
when all i wanted to say,
was already said a thousand life times ago

This is my favourite part. What a beautiful way to put it.

 

[Siany]

Beautiful work

 

[neverwas]

just bumping this for those that havent read it cause i really loved it

 

[Chaotic Action Man]

wow thanks so much for the replies everyone. i posted this the day i went away on vacation to a place with no internet (have to love the bush). sorry for the bump, but i was really touched by the comments.

 

[frostyangel]

I can't even quote any of it.. I like every word...

Thanks for making me realize things I could never say myself...

 

[neverwas]

bump