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[spinkle]

just after crash and shudder
impact substituted for arrival
shattering on the threshold
thus entering broken again
entranced and disconnected
settling on vague discomfort
shyness slightly forced
maintaining the illusion of distance
maturity displayed through withholding
caress at the crest of emotion.

 

[Chaotic Action Man]

shyness slightly forced
maintaining the illusion of distance
maturity displayed through withholding
caress at the crest of emotion.

i really like these last four lines. they seemed to echo in my head. the last line melted me. lots of passion in that last line. *melting*

 

[cherub]

I like this alot spinks,,, reaches me alot right now hun

hugs

~Cin~

 

[ice-9]

nice piece, spinks. diggin the style.