untitled written around 7/03

[e_asy]

i wrote this awhile ago, when i was questioning alot of things, it doesnt currently have a title but its pretty clear... anyway just thought i would share


i would give my entire life...
to live just one perfect day
but that day does not exist,
so i guess im here to stay...

if there was a reason...
that i live and others die
what would the reason be,
and in the end i ask you why.

if god has a plan for us,
what will come of me,
hope he forgives all my wrongs,
but i guess ill wait to see...

explain this life to me,
tell me im blessed, and not damned to fall
and when this now meaningless life is over
i will know the answer to all...

 

[cherub]

i think the flow is well which is hard to do with these kinds of poems you did a great job!